User:Nurseyvonne713/Achilles (son of Zeus)/DoubleQuarterPounder123 Peer Review

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This article covers one of the strongest warriors in Greek mythology, and while talks about aspects that may not be known to most people, should have a little bit more coverage on said things. This is a great plan and list of bullets for the draft, but I think you should add more details about his relations with Zeus and other famous people in Greek mythology, while also covering what made him such a ruthless warrior. However, the information that was provided is backed up by reliable sources, all in which were able to be opened with ease.