User:Nxstevens/sandbox

Heather's Comments

 * March 15th- Good! Hopefully these headings will help you stay organized.  My recommendation next is for you to actually watch the movie, take notes and write a summary.  If you find a summary somewhere else, you'll have to change it so much so it isn't plagiarized.  The easiest way is to watch it yourself.  Copy and paste the part of "Sex Express Coffee" you want to update. (Make changes in sandbox and not on actual Wikipedia page yet).  Make sense?  Only source 8 below looks useable.  What are those other sources?  They should all help you improve the Sex Express Coffee Wikipedia page.

Natasha's Work Log
The Article I have chosen to edit is titled, Sex Express Coffee. The first observation I made would be the "E" in "Express" is not uppercase. The article has the cast members listed, the run time, and the genre. It is missing a summary.

After some research, I've learned the lower case "express" and "coffee" are purposely under case. I found this out from the IMDB page.

A small summary of this film is listed on it's IMDB page.

3/15: I am having trouble finding the movie on under the radar websites. So far, I have not found a link to buy the movie.

The other links lead back to the main wikipedia page since I was referencing it. So it looks like only source 8 is usable. This would mean that the more outside sources (outside of the wiki page) the better. I am having trouble removing the previous sources.