User:Nxxxdine/Cell-mediated immunity/BiologyBarbie Peer Review

General info
Nxxxdine
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Nxxxdine/Cell-mediated immunity
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Cell-mediated immunity

Evaluate the drafted changes
It is slightly unclear about what has been edited, as the beginning piece that begins after "Edit Summaries" appears to be very similar to the beginning of the already published Wikipedia article. The edits should be made under either the Lead or Article Body section, and I am unsure about why the references are appearing under the Article Body portion rather than the References body portion. Also, when adding citations, I feel that we should be finding more outside citations to support the claims within the Wikipedia article rather than re-citing other articles that appear on Wikipedia. In the portion that follows the Edit Summaries, I am unsure about what is written in your wording, as most of it appears to be directly word from word from the Wikipedia article. I would suggest editing more portions of the article in the appropriate sections (lead, article body, etc.) and reformatting your citations so they fall in the appropriate references category.