User:Nyankonyan/735–737 Japanese smallpox epidemic/Jesmul2022 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) User:Nyankonyan/735–737 Japanese smallpox epidemic


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Nyankonyan/735%E2%80%93737_Japanese_smallpox_epidemic?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Still a work in progress but seems to have a basic outline to do more research. and seems like they are communicating well.