User:Nyankonyan/735–737 Japanese smallpox epidemic/Karsenpierce Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

735–737 Japanese smallpox epidemic by Nyankonyan, Bmeade08, Jaguilar101


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Nyankonyan/735%E2%80%93737_Japanese_smallpox_epidemic?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * 735–737 Japanese smallpox epidemic
 * 735–737 Japanese smallpox epidemic

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Hello everyone. I really like the idea of adding a culture section to the article. I think you all should expand on that some more. My best advice to you would be to fact check all of the sources already on the article. There are so many and if I were you, I would make sure that they are all correct and necessary. All of the content you have added so far looks good to me. Since there is already so much information on the article, I would focus more on trimming it down rather than adding to it. Some of the things in the current article are repetitive. Good luck with the rest!