User:Nyaronya/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
The article I am evaluating is Mother/Android.

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article after a precursory glance of the contents and saw that some sections were underdeveloped and the Plot section contained most of the article. Overall, I felt that this article felt incomplete, especially for a recent film.

Evaluate the article
Lead Section


 * The lead is straight and to the point with the basic information about the movie is provided. However, it can be improved on by adding more details about the premise of the movie based on the official synopsis of the movie (provided by Hulu and/or Netflix).
 * Currently only provides the initial release date (Dec. 17, 2021) when Hulu had the distribution rights in the USA. It does not mention that it was also internationally distributed by Netflix on Jan. 7, 2022.

Content


 * Most sections of the article feel incomplete, as they only contain one or two sentences.
 * The Plot section of the article is very long in comparison to the other sections, and has some parts that can be summarized further.

Tone and Balance


 * The tone of the article is neutral and does not seem biased.

Sources and References


 * Most sources and references in this article are from magazine articles and reviews, however it is expected as it is an article of a film.
 * There is a reference that goes to an Instagram post from the director. I am unsure if that is a valid source.
 * For the Reception section, it only references Rotten Tomatoes. Other references should be included such as Metacritic, The Wall Street Journal, etc. Notable reviews may also be included.

Organization and writing quality


 * The writing in the article is clear and concise and has good organization.

Images and Media


 * The only image in the article is of the release poster that was on Hulu. If other promotional material is available it could be added, but otherwise there is nothing wrong with the image.

Talk Page


 * There is only post on the talk page is someone who left a review about the movie, which does not belong as it does not pertain to the article. There is no other activity on the talk page for this article.

Overall impressions


 * This article is incomplete as there is not much content in the sections other than the Plot section. Though there isn't much information on the movie and production, the sections shouldn't be only one or two short sentences as that makes those pieces of information irrelevant or incomplete.