User:Nyaronya/Mother/Android/Neutralplaid Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Nyaronya


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Mother/Android


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mother/Android

Evaluate the drafted changes
Changes are primarily wording related in main body as well as additions to the Filming and Critical Response sections. I thought the additional information was very helpful but didn't see a ton of use in all the main body rephrasing since it's not contributing detail that wasn't already there. It would be great to see more even more information added to the end sections and perhaps a production photo, publicity shot, or photo of something significant to the film.