User:OMeyer01/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
(Academic discipline - Wikipedia)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Curious to know more about academic discipline and it will help me know more about how I should be taught as well as how to properly learn)

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

The lead section gives a good overview on what the entirety of the article is about however I think they need to "dumb" it down a little because for some people the section is a little wordy. The content on the most part gives a good overview of academic discipline. However some of the paragraphs needs to be a little longer such as the functions and criticism paragraph. As well it needs to have some pictures to have some sections and breaks for the reader as well as to keep them entertained because its not quiet a page turner topic so you should work harder to keep the reader.