User:OTUAustinOligario/Gaming computer/Ammarh1234 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

OTUAustinOligario


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:OTUAustinOligario/Gaming computer


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Gaming computer

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content added is very well-organized and consists of features of a gaming computer that the average person may not be aware of. I like how you had a detailed lists of computer components that were related to the topic.

I would add media (images) of each component and cite it in order to further explain and display the info. The current picture that is embedded is a bit dark and hard to see.

The current content is neutral and well-defined. Keep up the good work (~)