User:OTatro/Biodiversity and drugs/Nsg1029 Peer Review

General info
OTatro
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:OTatro/Biodiversity and drugs - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Biodiversity and drugs - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Sources:

The sources are both up to date, and the links work.

Lead:

the lead should be updated, it can be once sentence that states "biodiversity can help developed medication" or something along those lines.

Tone:

the tone is balanced and neutral.

Organization:

In the first paragraph the sentences are very long. If it is possible to break them up a little, I would suggest doing that. I would also suggest describing some of the more technical words used in the article.