User:Obermirek/Lois Clark/Cafe.doppio Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? (provide username)Obermirek
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Obermirek/sandbox

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? Yes
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? A very nice one
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? Yes
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? No
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? Complete and exemplary

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? Yes
 * Is the content added up-to-date? Citations suggest no discoveries in the past 50 years
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? Unable to ascertain (missing) and all seemingly belongs
 * Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics? Yes, it portrays a woman scientist that has accomplished much and is notable

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral? Yes
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? No
 * Are there viewpoints that are over represented, or underrepresented? No
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? It is biographical, hence no persuasion

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? Scholarly journal in her field
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? Not ascertained
 * Are the sources current? No; likely nothing else available
 * Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible? Only 1 author
 * Check a few links. Do they work? Yes

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? Yes
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? Yes, need to make some minor edits (awkward phrases, usage errors)
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? Very nicely

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
 * Are images well-captioned? Could benefit from a picture of the scientist
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject? Marginal
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject? Unknown but likely not available
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles? Yes, straightforward biography
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable? No

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? very much
 * What are the strengths of the content added? Well referenced from academic journal
 * How can the content added be improved? minor edits (awkward phrases, usage errors)

Overall evaluation
Nicely done page with good content; wish their were links for discoverability. Good use of subtitles in organization and readability