User:ObliqueFault/Granitoid/Morgan.b18 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ObliqueFault


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:ObliqueFault/sandbox-Granitoid-Adding content draft
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Granitoid

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The lead is neutral and is concise while also providing enough information about the topic.

Content

All added content is relevant and remains neutral. I suggest adding more information and photos to the article.

Sources and References

Every fact has a source attached. The references listed are not well formatted and don't provide the information on where the articles are from. I suggest going through each reference and cite them using a consistent method. Reference 1 and 3 are the same source however the link is broken in 1. I would also recommend finding more current sources as many of the ones used are over 30 years old.

Organization

The article is well written and easy to read. It would benefit from sections as it would separate the lead from the rest of the article.

Overall impressions

Overall the article is easy to read and though it is short contains relevant information. I would recommend adding more content and images, as well as proofreading as there are some minor grammatical errors.