User:Oboerob/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Vivian Fine

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I selected this article because it is of a big area of interest to me and there is a lot of missing information on the life and works of this composer in the wikipedia page that I know from my own research and the information available on her estate's website.

Evaluate the article
The introduction of this article can use a bit of cleaning up. it is a clear introduction, however it is not written in a way that clearly defines who Vivian Fine is. You don't find out why Vivian Fine is so significant to what field until the third sentence. The content of the article is balanced and is correct, however at times it is unclear or incomplete. The article is written in a very "matter of fact" presentation and only states facts that are backed up by the source material. The sources for this page are good, however there are very few. The sources are from the estate of Vivian Fine and a published biography of Vivian Fine, I would like to see more sources if they are available. All of the links work. The overall article could be written better as there are times when the writing is unclear or grammatical mistakes are present. The overall organization is very good though. There is only one image of Vivian fine on this article and I would like to see more images and links to performances of her work. There are no discussions on the Talk pages, however it is part of several WikiProjects including Women's History, Chicago, and Women in Music. The overall status of the article is that it needs improvement and any new information and content will benefit this page!