User:Ochoajaz000/sandbox

article: sky cubacub

first draft evaluation:


 * 1) lead section: one sentence long. includes birthday, occupation, and importance. very short, will need more information.
 * 2) content: has sections of early life, education, career, and achievements. these are good sections to have for an artist, with early life and career having sufficient amount of information. education and achievements are the shortest sections, so will need more information. maybe can add a larger section about their clothing line, although there is good info about it already. more information about their job as editor of a zine.
 * 3) tone: pretty neutral throughout the article.
 * 4) sources: only around 5 sources, more can be possibly found through the school library website. majority of citations in article needed so i can work on inputting those. the sources themselves seem to be online articles/websites, so if possible i can try looking for more information in academic resources. all of the links work.
 * 5) organization: appropriate layout of information. the content is organized nicely in the article and the content bookmark tab.
 * 6) images: there are no images in this article. i will have to figure out copyright information about images of the artist. pictures of the artist and their work are extremely important for their identity and should be included in the article.
 * 7) talk page: there are two comments about it being a wiki education (supported) article. and the other is from a wikipedian complimenting the summarization of the artist. i will add my word of my contributions to this page when needed.
 * 8) impressions: i think this article is a good start. it will be a great launching pad for what i will work on to be my contributions.