User:Octobercosmos/Desert greening/Branzino05 Peer Review

General info
Octobercosmos, Nayebean
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Octobercosmos/Desert greening
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Desert greening

Evaluate the drafted changes
The group is in the early stages of their article so I will be reviewing the original article.

Lead Section: The lead section is very clear and concise. The author goes into great detail of what desert greening is and the positive impact that it has for humans, the environment, and the wildlife. The lead section also does a great job on informing the readers the steps such as tree planting that is necessary to attain the sustainable progress of desert greening.

Content : The content of the article is relevant to the topic of the article. The content that is used seems to be up to date with usage of articles that are both current and relevant to the topic of the article there also seems to be no equity gaps within the article.

Tone and Balance: The tone of the article is neutral with the sole purpose to inform and educate, there are no forms of persuasion to the reader.

Sources and References: Most of the references are current, the references are relevant to the main article with diverse authors and the use of well detailed and thorough information. All the links to the reference articles are currently working.

Organization: The article is well written and easy to read and understand, there are no grammatical and or spelling errors. The article is well organized with sections that reflect the major talking points. Each section is well detailed with good usage of relevant and current sources.

Images and Media: There are a few pictures that a featured throughout the article one recommendation would be to add a few more pictures at least one per section to give readers a better understanding of what is being discussed within the section as well as the overall article.

Overall Impression: This article is a great article to read about desert greening, I personally was not informed enough about desert greening and found the article to be a great read as well very informative.