User:OctopusGarden91/Economy of Peru/Serinali Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

OctopusGarden91 Diego


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:OctopusGarden91/Economy_of_Peru&veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template&redirect=no


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall this is a great draft! Just some minor grammatical errors that is very fixable! Maybe take out words like "Moreover" because it is more an essay like and argumentative narrative. Definitely need to fix grammatical errors, but good info!