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Sustainable livelihood
Sustainable livelihood

Sustainable Livelihood
I choose this article because I find this topic interesting and is relevant to our class discussion. Sustainable Livelihood calls for further research because many rural communities and NGOs can use the livelihood framework to guide progress in underrepresented communities in today's world. I found the page helpful; however, it could use some contributions from other editors interested in potential solutions for alleviating poverty.

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The Sustainable Livelihood (SL) page could use further research to provide a stronger sense of the essence of the Sustainable Livelihood Approach (SLA).

The introductory section could be reworded in a manner that is easier to understand for readers who are not familiar with SL. Moreover, the article could use more information about what constitutes SL and possible ongoing SLA discussions.

Regarding tone, the article is written in a neutral voice and does not include biased claims. Nevertheless, the are a few underrepresented points, such as the background of SL and newer forms of SLA (further research is needed). The organization could be improved by cleaning up redundant sentences. Nonetheless, the article is decently written with a logical outline.

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Last update in 2019

Expand on coverage / appropriate technology / Micro finance / social issues. --~