User:OctopusGarden91/Sustainable livelihood/Serinali Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

OctopusGarden91


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:OctopusGarden91/Sustainable_livelihood?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
These were just citations added a believe?