User:Odelach/Mister Pipeline/Huskyhero Peer Review

General info
Odelach
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Odelach/Mister Pipeline
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Mister Pipeline

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think your draft is great! Everything in the article is relevant to the topic, and nothing was distracting. Everything is neutral as well which was  awesome to see. None of your viewpoints are over or underrepresented. Your citations all seem to work and support your claims as well. Nothing seems to be out of date, and all of your facts so far are supported by reliable reference sources. I really liked how you got more in-depth about the second ever Mister Pipeline by sharing more about the surfers that were invited to compete as well as the cash prizes, this helps us visualize how the event slowly started to become known and what it entailed at the time! Good job on explaining how the title "Mister Pipeline" originated as well, and great job adding the section about how and why the competition is known worldwide. Your lead is really good as well, as it helps describe the initial history in terms of the creation of this competition, and why it was a big deal. My only concern is that you have in your lead that the first winner of the competition is Hakman, while later in the article we see the original article's winner as Artsdalen which is also listed in your sandbox. Are you able to clarify this for us in the next draft please? Also, if you could add some pictures that would be really cool as it'd help us learn more about what the event looks like in person! Otherwise, great job!