User:Odiericci123/Violence against women/Luciaxcuriel Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Odiericci123


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Odiericci123/Violence_against_women?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Violence against women

Evaluate the drafted changes
The first portion of the content both in the draft and added into the Wikipedia article is well written and offers statistical information that is unbiased. It furthers the idea in the subsection of Domestic Violence. For this added content, I'd suggest to back and make sure that the grammar is appropriate. I noticed that there was no period at the end of the sentence. I also noticed that although a reference was added in the sandbox, there was no reference added in the Wikipedia article.

For the section portion of the content in both the draft and Wikipedia article, the content is well written and follows the idea of the subsection of targeted groups. Once again, I'd recommend to look back at the content published onto Wikipedia and checking the grammar. Possibly running this written portion through Grammarly or having someone read the work you published could help find these mistakes.