User:Odunn23/User:Cward18vu/Water supply/Odunn23 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Cward18vu


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Cward18vu/Water supply


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Water supply

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The lead has not been updated to reflect new content added. The lead does include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic, but right now it is placed in the article body section rather than the lead section. The lead does include a brief description of the article's major sections. The lead does not include information that is not present in the article. The lead is concise. The content added is relevant to the topic. The content added is up-to-date. There is no missing content or content that does not belong. The article does deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps. As of now, the content does not address topics related to historically underrepresented groups. The content added is neutral. There are no claims that appear heavily biased to a particular position. There are no viewpoints that appear overrepresented or underrepresented. All of the new content is backed up by credible secondary sources. The content accurately portrays what the secondary sources say. The sources are thorough and current. The sources are written by a diverse spectrum of authors. The sources used appear to be the best at the internet's disposal. The links work. The content added is well-written. The content has no grammatical or spelling errors. The content is well-organized. The article does include an image that enhances the understanding of the topic. The image is well-captioned. The image is not cited. The image is laid out in a visually appealing way. The content added has improved the overall quality of the article. A strength of the content added is that helps the reader to further understand the topic, but could be flushed out even more so.