User:OdysseyOfGrace

=Needs Improvement=

Performance
 * Clearly more information could be provided
 * Lead could use more clarity (see later bullet)


 * More headers and sections needed to show variety
 * Expand upon the existing content in the contents (likely through reorganization)


 * Lead is vague with definitions
 * Unclear language
 * Some minor copyedits needed

Human geography
 * The sections need to be more organized
 * Could be through fleshing out sections/combining with other sections


 * Lots of headers following large chunks of text
 * Likely needs reorganization/reformatting of information

=Articles to Work on=
 * 1) Performance
 * 2) Comic timing
 * 3) Human geography

=Feminism in Mexico= The Problem:
 * The lead is very long and could be condensed with information bumped into other sections/subsections
 * Lead has too much detail
 * Sections could use reorganization
 * Feminist theory paragraph doesn’t make sense
 * List of Notable Figures could be organized instead of being one long list
 * Social movements section is awkward and short

Tasks:
 * Make Second Wave a section under History (3.2) and move the corresponding years to be subsections to correspond with the lead
 * Make new section/subsection for any additional unique info found only in the lead
 * Need to put Feminist theory in relation to theory in Mexico
 * Put a tag to Feminist theory underneath the header


 * Look at History section and look for "issues" to make a new section
 * Put info about indigenous women’s rights
 * Look to see what can be condensed
 * Group events by instances
 * The first three sentences in 1990 section could be condensed, a bit off-topic


 * Ask about groupings of time in the History section on the talk page
 * Move History Section after Feminist Theory, before Gender Rebels
 * Save this for last


 * Look into people listed on the Notable Figures section
 * Model section after that of Feminism in India
 * Cite Wikipedia article source for this info


 * See if Social movements section is able to be moved or integrated into another section
 * Check for bias

=The Sims (video game)= The Problem:
 * Simplify Expansion packs section to model the Sims 4 Expansion pack section
 * See also the Expansion only subsection in existing article


 * Expansion pack section also needs verification
 * Two sections list similar info and should be reorganized

Tasks:
 * Figure out how to organize Gameplay section
 * Use Mario Party 3 page and StarCraft page as guides


 * Use template for Expansion only subsection to modify current Expansion pack section
 * Briefly research to verify that info in this section is correct
 * Potentially add citations?
 * Compare Sims 4 and StarCraft pages to determine the best course of action


 * Determine approach for reorganization
 * Expansions only falls under Compilations heading rather than Expansion packs
 * See if Expansions only subsection can fall under Expansion packs heading
 * Leave Core game with expansions as the only subsection under Compilations heading


 * Potentially add a Cultural impact section and reorganize information under Reception
 * Use StarCraft page as a reference for this


 * Ports and remakes can be moved to expansions and versions