User:Ogag3r/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Sustainable fashion

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

I am a fashion major and sustainable fashion is one of the most talked about topics in the industry. Sustainable fashion truly is the future of fashion. I was pleased to see how detailed the page was with many different sections.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

- The lead section should mention the impact on the environment the fashion industry alone, just briefly.

- The uses the movie Pretty Woman as an example for fast fashion splurges being celebrated. There should be more current examples that can reach a wider audience.

- Many sources were out of date, from before 2010.

-This article was well written and is backed by WikiEd. The article had many different topics covered which allowed the audience to get a holistic understanding of sustainable fashion.

-One thing that would make this better would be adding in more examples that are relevant in todays world. Also continuing to update on the changing legality of logistics of this issue and how that affects the industry.