User:Ogran004/Janie Eickhoff/Bheggs001 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Janie Eickoff)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ogran004/Janie_Eickhoff/Bheggs001_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
In the "Early life" section I think it would be better to talk about her not directly from the source you cited, maybe re-write in your own words.

Talk about her background information where she is from, when she was born, how she got into cycling.

Maybe put the picture of Janie on the top of the page so people can get a visual image of who they are reading about.

talk about her family more if there is more information on them being athletes.

Put early in sports next too early in life so that people can understand how she developed as an athlete.