User:Ogran004/Janie Eickhoff/Esalo001 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Janie Eckoff


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ogran004/Janie_Eickhoff?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Everything in the sandbox is related to Janie Eckoff. I did not notice anything too distracting but I did see that some of the headings were similar and felt that some of the sections could be combined into one section. An example of this would be to combine early life and early sports life into one section. I also found it a little distracting that the section titled family sports history contained such little information, this is another section you may want to combine with early life. I also recommend for some of the information included to be restructured or reworded to form a more flowing and coherent section of information. This would be particularly helpful for the first section that currently contains information from a variety of source listed in a non flowing manner. I also recommend that you put the sections into a more logical order. I feel that the information provided in the sections titled early sports and bicycle career should not come last on your wiki page and should at least come before the information in hall of fame and achievements. There is no bias claims or framing of the information. Information and viewpoints are evenly and deservingly represented. One section that could contain some more information is the section titled bicycle career. The links in the citation work and support the claims in the sandbox. The information is supported by reliable references that are not out of date.