User:Ogran004/Janie Eickhoff/MikeyCorsi Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jaine Eikhoff


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ogran004/Janie_Eickhoff?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
After reviewing the Wikipedia page on Jaine Eikhoff I was a little confused. It was not very clear from the start and I feel that it is not well formatted. There was a good amount of information which was something that I did like about this page but I also feel that there is some information that could be taken out. There was also not many hyperlinks so it was tough to try and figure out everything related to this women. At the end of the Wikipedia page, I feel like there are too many references, this group should try to add more of their own writing instead of just finding a bunch of references and putting the information in. Finally, I think if this group organizes this page a little more, they can have a very clear and informative Wikipedia page.