User:Oh Im Sunny/Rosanne Somerson/Mackanesp21 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Oh Im Sunny


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Oh Im Sunny/Rosanne Somerson
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Rosanne Somerson

Evaluate the drafted changes
This person has added a new statement about Somerson's retirement. They have a done a good job at keeping the statement neutral, and they don't make any biased claims. There are two wiki-links in the article but there could be a wiki-link for RISD. The source used for the new statement is fine for this, but try to find peer reviewed and scholarly sources for further edits.