User:Ohaew04/Famine in Yemen/Yungkorine2009 Peer Review

- New content has been added to article

- There doesn't seem to be any in-text citations

- No bibliography added

- Source of information needs to be stated

- Add footnotes to allow reader to see where your information comes from

- Article edits sound bias due to lack of source information

- Content is well written and easy to read

- The overall content of the article is strong and descriptive...stating the facts...

- Once again having trouble giving feedback due to the lack of information given that comes from a source. Without these in-text citations the added paragraph(s) loose credibility appearing to be opinionated.

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