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I evaluated this article on Johan Kamminga Johan Kamminga

Overall, the article seems to be well done. The content is focused on the topic and seems to be in a neutral, unbiased tone. However, some information seems to be lacking. As for education history, it only references his doctorate and where he got it, but fails to mention his undergraduate education, or even areas of interest. The organization is somewhat lacking, without headers describing each section of the the page. Albeit, the article is rather short and the headers could be seen as clunky, it might help to further organize the article as a whole.

While the content and the tone are focused and neutral, the citations might need a little work. Most are fine and have working links or at the very least an ISBN number to find the work, but the first citation is simply broken. Instead of opening a scholarly article or a way to access it, it opens to a godaddy.com site advertisement? Perhaps it can only be viewed with a godaddy subscription? Or more likely the domain holder never renewed their subscription and the site was taken down. Anyways, I was unable to access the page the first reference linked to. The fourth link, while it isn't necessarily a problem with the citation, is more an issue with the source, mainly because it seems to be inaccessible to those outside of Tasmania, or Australia as a whole (Error Code: 403 Forbidden. The server denied the specified Uniform Resource Locator (URL). Contact the server administrator. (12202) ). Or some other issue that prevents me from assessing the source.