User:Ohtani MVP/Criminal law of the United States/Anonquokka Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Criminal Law of the United States

(Ohanti MVP, Beaver 14, JohnTer0)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ohtani MVP/Criminal law of the United States


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Criminal law of the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The edits are very detailed on the various criminal acts. The introduction provides much more information about the U.S. justice system whereas the original consists of one sentence.

There are cases of hyperlinks being provided to allow readers to access other Wikipedia articles on the topic in case they are confused about the term used in the article. This is beneficial, especially for those unfamiliar with the legal terminology which were also removed for some crimes.

The writing style is neutral which is required for an appropriate article. As for the sources, they are reliable with legal penal codes and secondary sources. Considering the original article cannot cover all laws, the edits provide more crimes like prostitution, other sexual crimes, and DUIs. It is possible that these crimes are part of an independent article due to these being unique.