User:Oikogeniakes15/Prisoner/Catluver777 Peer Review

Hi! I believe your contributions have been helpful in creating new content for your article. You remain to have a neutral tone throughout your work. However, when you discuss prison education it could be beneficial to discuss why people argue education is beneficial. When you discuss the state-trait anxiety inventory you could potentially include situations that may induce feelings of anxiety for prisoners. As well as when you state the six basic mechanisms in SHU syndrome, you could go into further detail about them. Overall, your article looks very organized and uses appropriate sources.

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