User:Ojohn2020/Snail/Vaughnm2020 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ojohn2020


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ojohn2020/Snail - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The articles grammar is very good. The points mentioned are clear and concise and are an easy read for the people who would be viewing this article. My only critique would be that the paragraphs could use headers to specify what is being discussed specifically about the snails. The paragraphs are a little too mixed together.