User:OliveHyperion61/Nike (company)/Therealworldtopg Peer Review

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Mariano


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Evaluate the drafted changes
The Nike, Inc. page on Wikipedia gives a thorough account of the company's background, offerings, and influence on the sports wear market. The article has a clear structure that makes it simple to read and navigate through the many sections. The article opens with a quick overview of the origins and development of the business, followed by a thorough history of Nike's products, advertising methods, and CSR activities.

This article's thorough examination of Nike's marketing initiatives is one of its strong points. The "Just Do It" motto and the "Air Jordan" shoe line are two of Nike's most effective advertising strategies, and the page offers a thorough examination of them. The controversy over Nike's marketing strategies, including the exploitation of sweatshop labor in the creation of its goods, is also covered in this article.

In regards to the added data by Mariano I believe he has a done a great job. I think the draft is well-written and useful in my capacity as a peer reviewer. The details offered on Nike's efforts and strategies to mitigate climate change are thorough and illuminating. The inclusion of data, such as the pledge to reduce carbon emissions by 50% by 2030, gives the reader an understandable and quantifiable objective. This piece may be read by a wide audience because of its simple and understandable language.

The organization of the work is excellent, beginning with Nike's dedication to reducing their carbon footprint, then focusing on their investments in environmentally friendly materials and manufacturing processes, and concluding with their "Move to Zero" initiative. With this structure, Nike's initiatives to mitigate climate change are presented in a straightforward and logical sequence.

I think the article could include more concrete instances of Nike's environmentally friendly materials and production methods. Although recycled polyester, organic cotton, and water-based adhesives are mentioned in the article, further information on how these materials are utilized in Nike goods would be beneficial. The post would gain depth and interest if specific instances of Nike's inventive production methods were included.

In general, the article does a good job of communicating Nike's dedication to sustainability and their efforts to stop climate change. It is a well-written and educational article that offers important context for Nike's environmental endeavors.