User:Oliver darmody/Anarchism in Mexico/Harelia Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Oliver darmody


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 * User:Oliver darmody/Anarchism in Mexico


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 * Anarchism in Mexico

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Hi! I really enjoy your topic and think that it is fascinating. Just to clarify, where are you planning on adding “Anarcopunk In Mexico?” Will it go under the Mexican Revolution or below The Mexican Anarchist Federation? When talking about the politics of the anarcopunks, are there any examples of their political activism? Also, I think that the politics section could benefit from one additional sentence, really clarifying the idea of self-management. Lastly, this is really picky, but the a in Autogestión, shouldn't be capitalized. Nonetheless, I think that your lead does a very good job of summarizing the topic! Harelia (talk) 18:35, 7 April 2023 (UTC)