User:Olivia.gehrke/Hymenopus coronatus/Newyorkmainer Peer Review

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User Olivia.gehrke


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 * Hymenopus coronatus

Lead
Concise while still including relevant, generalized information regarding the species.

Article Content
I think "As the female orchid continues to develop" in the "description" section could be reworded. Despite prior references to its resemblance to an orchid flower, its might still be confusing to not refer to it as the mantis in the context of this line. If the referred to article states it clearly, the mimicry of Reduviidae bugs may also be classified as Batesian mimicry, which could then be linked in the wiki page.

Within the "behavior" section I think the following portion appears rather insignificant and irrelevant: "Costa asks rhetorically 'Why has so little [research] been done on parental care in mantids, such an unexpected and intriguing aspect of their behavior?'". It might make more sense to reword it along the lines of "Costa comments on the lack of research conducted on parental care in mantids"

This article could benefit from an expansion in the "Distribution" and "Diet" sections, possibly including information relating to the specific habitat(s) the mantis lives in and/or their mechanisms for feeding.