User:Oliviaabad/The Handmaid's Tale (opera)/MarissaPAlit Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Oliviaabad


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Oliviaabad/The Handmaid's Tale (opera)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * The Handmaid's Tale (opera)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead Section

The lead section provides the reader with contents that can direct them to the desired section of the page. The peer modified this section by removing the brief introduction to the expected inclusion of content that can be found on the original, unedited page. This modification leaves the draft article to include information that is present in the article, from the source of the "Contents" box only.

Content

The content seems up-to-date and aligned with references throughout the page. Content includes terminology and or detail that is appropriate to the central theme(s) of the page. It addresses topics related to injustices and the suffering of peoples that relate to the themes. Background provides the reader with main points that could possibly be altered and included in the Lead Section. Although not entirely necessary for this page it seems, it may be beneficial to better establish the significance of the conflicts mentioned in the article's initial content.

Tone and Balance

The article well-informs the reader of background, synopsis content, critical reception, adaptation, music, performances and recordings through an instructional tone.

The tone is neutral, and no biases are present in the article. However, balance in content for the Background section could be improved. Should the peer decide to provide more insight and knowledge in the first paragraph, the reader will have a better understanding for the transition of topics. Again, it may seem unfit as this specific Wikipedia page topic is projected toward The Handmaid's Tale (opera).

Sources and References

The references are reliable sources in that journals have provided thee peer and page with credible information.

Organization and writing quality

The writing is of notable quality, and information is provided in succinct form.

Images and Media

The article does not include images or captions in both the public page and the peer's draft as of yet. If an image is included in the latter part of thee project, I wonder what direction of the image content they will choose. i.e., an image from The Handmaid's Tale, or an image that depicts something or someone of the opera; perhaps a person or symbol reflecting either of the two.

Talk Page Discussion

Comments will be provided once the peer review is complete.

Overall Impressions

This article is useful in various areas for it provided undertones of music and politics in relation to the subject of the page. There has been a lot added to sections which is extremely effective, given that the peer was able to condense what the public page doesn't seem to portray as of yet. The peer also added more resources which extended the references for the page, thus allowing the page to tidy in format and in information.