User:Oliviadey/Participatory Politics Foundation/Brooke.baker873 Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Oliviadey
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Oliviadey/sandbox

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Yes the lead has been updated
 * the lead gives a good intro about what PPF is and is not overly detailed

Content
Guiding questions:


 * all the content added is very relevant and up to date
 * to my knowledge there is nothing large missing or wrong

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * All of the information presented is neutral and in a balanced tone of voice

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * The sources are all reliable and working links

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * the content is clearly organized and uses sections well
 * potentially could add bolder headers

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * N/A

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * N/A

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * She did a great job of improving the article, it is much more complete and the information added is all accurate and relevant