User:Oliviasalter12/Mahoning County, Ohio/Dwolfor3 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Olivia Salter (Oliviasalter12)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Mahoning_County,_Ohio&oldid=1007998167


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mahoning County, Ohio

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your addition of the two sentences about Mahoning County's congressional districts was helpful and definitely relevant to the "Politics" section. Since the rest of the section discusses Mahoning County's long history as a Democratic stronghold, perhaps you could add some info about the demographic/geographic factors that account for Bill Johnson's success as a Republican in the county.

In looking at the rest of the page, it looks like the "History" section could really use more info. The area has a lot of history. There are some fascinating stories about the Youngstown Mob, the steel mills, and how the area has been devastated by offshoring/globalization - worth checking out. And Youngstown used to be a big union hub, which contributed to its Democratic politics; you could possibly add info about that to the "Politics" section.

Nice work! ~