User:Oliviascott3/Environmental justice/Am0ria1 Peer Review

General info
Oliviascott3
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Oliviascott3/Environmental justice
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Environmental justice

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your paragraph is well written. The flow is good, and the information is presented clearly and concisely. Maybe consider adding more specific information regarding the harm comes from drinking unclean water - like the risk of developing certain illnesses.

The sources used are also good; they are both recent and credible