User:Oliviascott3/Water in California/Am0ria1 Peer Review

General info
Oliviascott3
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Oliviascott3/Water in California
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
The additions to this article are well done. The impacts of disparities in water accessibility are really important, and the inclusion of how certain individuals are harmedy these disparities isfits well. It might be beneficial to add a specific example of some of the proposals you mention at the end of the article. Overall, your edits and sources are good!