User:Oliviascott99/Octopus tetricus/Darcyperin Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Oliviascott99


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Octopus tetricus


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

The lead is concise, but also a bit vague. I think a few more sentences that include a brief description of the sections of the article should be added in order to beef up this section.

Content:

The content of this article is informative and relevant. I think it would be beneficial to add a few more sections to your article maybe containing information on this specie's life cycle and reproduction, or possibly the phylogeny/taxonomy etc. I think some of wording could be explained/defined a bit more. For example, I don't think most people know what 'rufous arm faces' are.

Tone/Balance:

I think the information in this article is delivered in a neutral, non-biased manor. The article is also written in a way that persuades the reader to feel one way or another.

Sources/References:

I think it would be beneficial to add a few more sources, specifically peer-reviewed journal articles. It also appears that a lot of information that is cited in the article comes from third reference, so I think it may be beneficial to add some more sources, or add other information from the other sources in the reference list, so that the information isn't biased towards only one source.

Organization:

The organization is pretty good, but it may be beneficial to also break up the 'habitat and behavior' section, so that the article is a little more organized, and specific information can be more easily found.

Images:

There is only one image, but it would be helpful to have other pictures maybe showing what the full body looks like, or maybe one of their habitat.

Overall impression:

Overall I think you have a really great start! With just a few minor tweaks, and a few more journal article references/information I think it will be a very informative and useful resource!