User:Oliviazorrilla/Quantum key distribution/Lucluc97 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Cjiang8, Oliviazorrilla


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Oliviazorrilla/Quantum key distribution


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Quantum key distribution

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

No change in the lead of the page and I do not believe that any was necessary.

Content:

The added content included two additional sections to the quantum key exchange portion of the wiki. These included Device Independent Quantum Key Distribution and Twin Fields Quantum Key Distribution. I believe that these sections were clear an thorough as well as being well sources and cited. The other content added was a section for experimental implementations in the implementations portion of the page. Again, this section is clear and thorough while being well cited.

Tone and Balance:

Due to most of the information being factual, it is well balanced. There was no argument to be made and therefore none was.

Sources and References:

Great sources, mostly scholarly articles which are well sources and researched. Most are very recent and relevent.

Organization:

Well organized, no complaints with the layout of reasoning. Could not find any grammatical errors.

Images and Media:

Not available, none added.

Overall Impression:

Overall a good adition to the page. Necesary information well cited and relevant data. I applaud the writers ability to pull useful information out of some dense sources. Good job finding relevant information to a relatively large wikipedia page.