User:Omar Magdy Rashwan/Al-Fattah al-Aleem Mosque/Basel El Husseini Peer Review

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(Omar Magdy Rashwan)
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Omar%20Magdy%20Rashwan/Al-Fattah_al-Aleem_Mosque?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
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Evaluate the drafted changes
I feel like the lead section is very large. It needs to be condensed into the most crucial details and the rest should be transferred to the following section/subtitles. The section for the contractors could be formatted better and the section for the cost should be removed, in my opinion, and its content should be included in the Context Section. The Context section should be between the Lead and the Architecture section and should also include the content that was removed from the Lead section.

The Architecture section contains good information but requires better formatting. For example, I would make the Domes under one subtitle instead of having many subtitles. Also, there are a few spelling and formatting mistakes, some of the are: "heigh" (in the Minaret subtitle); the word "fatimid" should be capitalized (in the Minaret subtitle); the word "centre" in the Central Dome subtitle should be 'center'. Since "centre" is French not English. IF there are more images it would be better as well.