User:Omar Magdy Rashwan/Al-Fattah al-Aleem Mosque/Yiayi Peer Review

The article contains a header, sub headings and paragraphs and is overall structured well, the article is divided into sections that convey information about the building well. The article is generally well-structured, with clear sections detailing different aspects of the mosque, including its architecture, entrances, domes, minarets, and contractors. However, consider organizing the information into more distinct subsections for easier readability. The article provides detailed descriptions of the mosque's features, including its entrances, domes, and minarets. However, ensure that the descriptions are concise and avoid unnecessary repetition. More images of the mosques interior and location would be beneficial for  the readers interpretation.

Additionally, more information about each part of the mosque could be added, some descriptions are lacking detail.

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