User:Omenlaptop15/Contaminants of emerging concern/Loon-erMoth Peer Review

General info
MARMISAHM and Omenlaptop15
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Omenlaptop15/Contaminants_of_emerging_concern?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Contaminants of emerging concern

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think the lead written out in your sandbox combined with the introduction in the already published wiki article would be a really strong lead for your final draft. It includes all necessary information, including the definition of what contaminants of emerging concern are, what their cause may be, what types there are, etc.

The body section of the article is structured well, particularly the history/background section, in addition to sources/pathways, environmental health impacts, research, and regulation. Simply expanding on each section would be adequate, I think.

If you use the references provided in the already published wiki article, that should also be sufficient for providing enough sources.