User:Omgmylife/Accounting irregularity/Kaner04 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Omgmylife


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Omgmylife/Accounting_irregularity?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Accounting irregularity

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I like the lead changes you made too you're article. I think you can use some more body content, like some up too date data, I believe would really add volume to the body section of the article. I believe that that the article is in a neutral tone and that you said everything in a non-bias way. I think you should try and add images to you're article. But overall i think you're article is well organized and could just use some more detail in the body section.