User:Omitt22/LGBT history in New York/SDgreen568 Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Omitt22
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Omitt22/LGBT history in New York

Content
Guiding questions:


 * The content is relevant to the topic.
 * the content is up-to-date.
 * There seems to be no missing content.
 * The article address a historically underrepresented population, LGBT community.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * The content added is neutral.
 * There are no biased claims.
 * There is no overrepresented viewpoint in the article
 * The added content does not persuade the viewer.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * The content is backed by reliable sources.
 * All sources are thorough.
 * The sources are current.
 * Sources are written by a diverse group of people.
 * The links work.

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Content is well written ad easy to follow.
 * No major grammatical errors found.
 * Content is well organized.

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * The article seems more complete with this new information.
 * Content gives greater detail to the section.
 * Content seems well researched and thought out.