User:Omotayo Akingba/African-American literature/Ed.osterberger Peer Review

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Omotayo Akingba


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 * Editing User:Omotayo Akingba/African-American literature - Wikipedia
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 * African-American literature - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead does a great job of stating what we are going to be talking about in Anna Julia Cooper as well as giving her work and goals. Adding another sentence to further explain Cooper may be beneficial to readers understanding of her, but since this is a page specifically about literature this lead accomplishes everything it needs to. The content is extremely relevant and I had no problem understanding Cooper's impact throughout this passage. The tone of this passage remains neutral throughout. With that being said, this is a rather difficult topic to explain in a neutral way but the use of quotations help present the information without any bias. The sources also seem to be very credible and accurate. Project muse, at least of the surface, appears to be a very appropriate and modern digital platform to pull from. Feminist teacher may not be as credible as others, especially with a rather direct citation, but seems to be applicable in this context. Although this section may benefit from a picture of Cooper, the overall structure and organization is very clear and easy to comprehend. The African-American literature Wikipedia page would benefit greatly from this passage.