User:Omotayo Akingba/African-American literature/Laurengordon4 Peer Review

Your paragraph sounds very good. The only thing I would possibly add is a little bit of background on Anna. I think it may start off a little abrupt. Possibly even just saying her age at the time she wrote the book. I think the rest of the paragraph has very important information that is to the point and is very important to the subject.