User:On The Dog Watch/Digital branding

The original sentence used the word, "great" "Coca-Cola is a great example of a successful value co-creation."

I changed it to "one example" to reflect more neutral language.

Edit: Coca-Cola is one example of a successful value co-creation.

In this, Original sentence: "Those who participate in social media sites should be cautious to keep their social media content on a professional-level, or refrain from posting content they would not want colleagues or clients to see." I felt like it seemed a little biased and lacked neutral language.

I tried to change it to a more neutral tone with this edited version: Edit: Those who participate in social media sites should be aware that their social media content is public and may be accessed by colleagues, clients, or other professional references.

The original sentence is: "Every user of the internet will eventually need a product or service."

My edit: There is an increasing number of users who use the internet to acquire services and products.

The phrase "every user" is implausible, so it may be better to change the phrase slightly to reflect an increase in numbers or a large number of users?